GUN CONTROL GRAMMAR

CORRECT ERRORS IN THE FOLLOWING:

.
 1    .In the United States, innocent people are victim of assaults, robberies and other

crimes.  Sometimes, these people want to protect any crime, but they should not be allowed to own a gun.

Many people say that legalization of guns or weapons could decrease the high percent of crimes in all cities

of the United States. On the other hand, if  people carrying a gun for protect themselves,

they could cause more dangerous.

2.     The innocent people want to find a solution to decrease the high percent of victims who are attacked with guns.

If people should be allowed to carry guns, it could help to prevent any kind of crime.

But at the same time it could bring more violence in the streets.

3.     Could we imagine how the violence  increasing in the United States if everybody has a gun?

If people should be allowed  carrying guns, the crime will go up and up..

All people could have more chance to kill anybody. In other cases, criminals could attack their victims more easy.

  4.     My mother's uncle had two grandsons who killed each other with gun. This

happened because they took the guns from  their grandfathers room.

When the two children saw the guns, they thought that they could  play with these.

 5.    Rolando was seven and Pablo was eight when this happened.

I think that my uncle was guilty to have those guns in his room.

If not allowed to have a gun in his home, his two grandsons still alive.

 6.    In conclusion, I feel that nobody should allow to carry or have guns because its